Доброе утро, форумчане! Я хочу вернуться в университет после годового перерыва, университет не против и меня не отчислял. В консульстве мне сказали снова подаваться на национальную визу и писать мотивационное письмо с обьяснениями что я делала год. Взгляните, пожалуйста, что у меня получилось, любые мнения, советы приветствуются! Спасибо!
DearSir or Madam, Iam writing this motivation letter as a part of the application foraGerman’s national visa to continue obtainingaMaster’s degree in “Computer Sience” inTheUniversity ofPassauafter having a gap year. Ihad beenworkingonamaster'sdegree inTheUniversity ofPassau staring with summer semseter 2017, after finishingthesemesterby passingthreeexams, I got serious health issueswhichdemanded prolonged treatment and were an obstacle for continuing studying effectively. So, I decidedtotemporarilycome back to my home country for treatment as in that case my living costs would be lower and my family could help me to get better sooner. Duringthefirstsemester off I mostly was staying in the hospital and was devoted to improvingmyhealth but I also got some time andgotwell enoughforeducating myself in the field of software testing –onespecialisation in the field of computer science Duringthe second semester off when I was mostly better, besides continuing treatment, I was working part time as a teacher at Baltic State Government University “Voenmekh” n.a. Ustinov and was teaching computer programming to the first year bachelor students. Also I have been continuing to work on improving my English, which is very important in the field of Computer Science, and, as a result, I passed IELTS examination gaining C1 (Advanced) level of English. Nowthat my health got significantly better and I feel I can continue working on my master's degree in the most efficient way I would like to go back to The University of Passau in October, at the start of winter semester 2018. Iam really excited about going back and study with renewed vigor as I belive obtaining this degree will gives me a lot of prospects in terms of a getting a good position in an International company in Germany or in Russia orcontinuestudying and obtaining a PhD in Computer Science and having an academic career. Thankyou very much for considering my visa application and I look forward to your positiveresponse. Yoursfaithfully, ElenaP Circus is all around